Thursday, August 11, 2011

Help me switch passive sentences to active sentences por favor?

There's nothing wrong with adverbs if they are used aptly. Think of them as seasoning - would you throw handsful of pepper, garlic etc.etc. into everything? Or would you use just a touch, to liven things up? Adverbs are the same way. You should be able to describe things in a positive manner, using descriptive phrases, and only occasionally slipping in the odd adverb. When you use them this way, they can make your writing sing.

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